For my poster I have chosen the subject of Aid, I wanted to create a positive image that would encourage people to think more about giving Aid. This poster isn't finished! Lots more detail is needed and especially some sort of strap-line at the bottom, but this gives the general idea of what I'd like it to look like in the end. :-)
5 comments:
i think it's really nice to look at and eyecatching and i like the colours and the brown paper you've used for the balloons basket, thats a nice idea. i'm just not sure what relevence the imagery has to giving aid? or is it just to catch your eye and then read the message? maybe you could add one other word or a sentence underneath the word aid to make the message a bit clearer? :)
The poster is visually stunning Amy. Lovely use of colour and shape.
It wouldn't encourage me to give Aid though, simply because it doesn't have that message that some people throughout the world need it.
I do like the idea of the parachute crate though - maybe you could progress this further?
I think this idea looks much better than your previous one as it's more simple but still eyecatching. Like you said i think you need to add a strapline to it so that it's clearer what the poster is about. Maybe you could also put more focus on the aid package too, perhaps make it stand out more? Hope that helps! :)
aha i'm such a dumbass, it's a package being dropped from a parachute, makes so much more sense now! 8-)
thanks lots for your comments people!! ^-^ I do need to make the crate stand out much more and add a sentence to make the message clearer, i'll work on it! And Bonnie after looking at it again i do see what you mean about it resembling a balloons basket thingy hehe you's not a dumbass its my fault! :-p
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