Thursday, 12 March 2009

Recycling idea update


I've continuted with the idea of cans and cars by using a fact. taken advice on it and re-produced these ideas, Please comment 

4 comments:

lynne said...

if you can show some work not the process ,i guess will be better for people to understand.
coz i know how you do ,i will it's better than before,easier.keep working.:)

Amy Goodwin said...

I think you should maybe stick with the slogan from your previous idea, but just the part that says 'what is your car made up of?' Also instead of using lots of cans to make up the car maybe you could just use one can and show that can as a car? I hope that makes sense to you!

Matt Preston said...

I think what we meant in our little group discussion the other day was to not draw the outline of the car, but to create the shape of a car with the cans - so the car isn't such an obvious element. It's a matter of what the cans can actually turn into.

So could I suggest building the cans up onto a photo of the car you've taken, but then deleting the car layer underneath, to give us more of an impactful image.

Also try looking at how you use the text - it should only really be a short phrase maximum. You want to be short and concise when it comes to persuading people to do something.

hope this has helped.

Mary-Lou Owen said...

Thanks, for ur comments