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Monday, 16 March 2009
Air pollution
I found this mask in a shop! What do you think? I don't wanna add text to the image, I don't think I need it.. Is it getting there?some comments or thoughts?
i love you idea. i have one suggestion for you. i think it would be a good idea for you to play around with the colour of the mask just so it complements the image of the baby more. think its just the green part that needs a little adjustment. other than that it looks really good
Nice idea Lotte :) I agree with Paul, a little adjustment on the mask (possibly darker on the head piece) would make it stand out away from the baby a little more.
I gave you my comments in person the other day but I agree with Darell here. Shadow and light needs to be taken into account to make the image more 'real'
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i love you idea. i have one suggestion for you. i think it would be a good idea for you to play around with the colour of the mask just so it complements the image of the baby more. think its just the green part that needs a little adjustment. other than that it looks really good
Nice idea Lotte :) I agree with Paul, a little adjustment on the mask (possibly darker on the head piece) would make it stand out away from the baby a little more.
Other than that it great :)
great visual, it really works!!
i also think it a nice twist how the poster looks like an advertisement for baby gas masks.
i think it would more realism if you darkened the eyes, i just think the mask would cast a shadow.
I gave you my comments in person the other day but I agree with Darell here. Shadow and light needs to be taken into account to make the image more 'real'
Well done
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