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Friday, 20 March 2009
recycling update V5
Hi, ive updated and improved my poster again. i think the simple outline is enough, and crushed cans building up colour would be to much for it, unsure. see what u think? x
The image is fine now and the placement of the text is better. I still think you need to try a different typeface though and i'm unsure if you actually need the 'recycle!!' part, i think it would work okay without it!
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The image is fine now and the placement of the text is better. I still think you need to try a different typeface though and i'm unsure if you actually need the 'recycle!!' part, i think it would work okay without it!
agree with Amy, typeface is not good... bubbly typefaces are not nice, try something simpler like helvetica, futura etc
look at th existing type faces for car ads and use something similar. simple bold ones are always class
thanks will do :)
Good advice from the group.
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