Friday, 20 March 2009

recycling update V5


Hi, ive updated and improved my poster again. i think the simple outline is enough, and crushed cans building up colour would be to much for it, unsure. see what u think? x

5 comments:

Amy Goodwin said...

The image is fine now and the placement of the text is better. I still think you need to try a different typeface though and i'm unsure if you actually need the 'recycle!!' part, i think it would work okay without it!

Alex Goodier said...

agree with Amy, typeface is not good... bubbly typefaces are not nice, try something simpler like helvetica, futura etc

ricky.hill said...

look at th existing type faces for car ads and use something similar. simple bold ones are always class

Mary-Lou Owen said...

thanks will do :)

Jeff said...

Good advice from the group.