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Wednesday, 11 March 2009
Give me give me,give me feedback please!!
there are two new works for homeless topic posters.keep using pictures and some sentences to make it works.tell me what you think ,Many thanks.
On the first one i really like the overall balance and the images. Colours are also good giving u a strange mood. I'm not so sure about your strapline. A stronger one could work better. On the second one i really like the image. Really strong, the couch and all. Home of the homeless... Maybe the image on its own could work better
i think the bottom one may have to much written info on, and may help to have homless children in and maybe a broken play-park in the background may have an effect.
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On the first one i really like the overall balance and the images. Colours are also good giving u a strange mood. I'm not so sure about your strapline. A stronger one could work better. On the second one i really like the image. Really strong, the couch and all. Home of the homeless... Maybe the image on its own could work better
Also the way you cut things in PS (eg. the kids on the bottom of the 1st one) Be i little bit more carefull with that
i think the bottom one may have to much written info on, and may help to have homless children in and maybe a broken play-park in the background may have an effect.
thank you for all your comments,i will improve it.cheers.
I prefer the top one because it looks much more effective than the bottom one. The bottom one has too many words on it.
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