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Thursday, 12 March 2009
What do you think this poster is about??
What do you think this poster is about?? I wonder if its clear enough!
I think this is working alot better now without the blood but like patryk said maybe you should add a slogan to it so it's more understandable to the viewer as some people may not know what it's about.
Ingrid, I think the message is clear enough - It can work without any text! I think it works well without the blood drops too. Simple. Straight to the point.
thanks a lot Matt =) I posted the poster up on another blogg... One comment from a man was: a. Drunk posterdesigner b. Angry yellow poster that wants its attention. c. Warningsign: Content in this bottle may lead to serious collage work.
I think it looks much better without the blood. I don't think you need the text because I am sure that most people will understand this poster BUT if you have to use the text, maybe you can put them on the hanger to make it look a bit more effective?
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i liked this one much better ingrid :)
good job:)
cathrine
Yeah, i think it works good as a collage but maybe you should consider adding some text description so it makes message more clear?
I think this is working alot better now without the blood but like patryk said maybe you should add a slogan to it so it's more understandable to the viewer as some people may not know what it's about.
Im thinking that the shadow sketch could be done but in blue and green pencil crayon (same style tho). To try and tie in the global factor?
just a thought :)
I think a slogan may hinder the visual impact you have going on, but Its still worth trying that approach just to see the result.
thanks for comments =)
I really want to have a poster without a slogan....since it should work in non-english speaking countries as well
Ingrid, I think the message is clear enough - It can work without any text! I think it works well without the blood drops too. Simple. Straight to the point.
I want to do one of those smiley face things.
: )
thanks a lot Matt =)
I posted the poster up on another blogg... One comment from a man was:
a. Drunk posterdesigner
b. Angry yellow poster that wants its attention.
c. Warningsign: Content in this bottle may lead to serious collage work.
hehe...
I think it looks much better without the blood. I don't think you need the text because I am sure that most people will understand this poster BUT if you have to use the text, maybe you can put them on the hanger to make it look a bit more effective?
I like it's dark and funny visually entertaining leave it as it is
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