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This idea works much better than your previous ones. However like Rajiv said you need to use a better quality image. Maybe think about the slogan more too, perhaps it doesn't need as much text. Also maybe try looking at different typefaces that will fit better with the overall design.
you need to get rid of the obvious rectangle shapes around the images of the cans and make them all blend together better, also need to do a better job of editing around the wheel. typeface could be nicer too
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You need a better quality of the image for the car and you need to show the cans a bit more noticeable.
Yeah i agree with Rajiv but i feel the image itself does represent your issue quite well, better improvement from the others.
This idea works much better than your previous ones. However like Rajiv said you need to use a better quality image. Maybe think about the slogan more too, perhaps it doesn't need as much text. Also maybe try looking at different typefaces that will fit better with the overall design.
you need to get rid of the obvious rectangle shapes around the images of the cans and make them all blend together better, also need to do a better job of editing around the wheel. typeface could be nicer too
oh and you don't need a question mark at the end of that statement
Hope the crit was useful yesterday?
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