Helloooo! I've made some changes! After the comments i have tried to make the box in the middle look more like a crate and also make it stand out more, i've also added a message at the bottom which hopefully makes the aim of my poster a bit clearer? Also Ians feedback made me rethink the background colour, i've gone for a darker look, i think it makes the rainbowy focus of the poster more prominent. Oh, and i've added a pink circle too! What do you think? ^-^
Tuesday 17 March 2009
Ch-ch-ch-ch-changes!
Helloooo! I've made some changes! After the comments i have tried to make the box in the middle look more like a crate and also make it stand out more, i've also added a message at the bottom which hopefully makes the aim of my poster a bit clearer? Also Ians feedback made me rethink the background colour, i've gone for a darker look, i think it makes the rainbowy focus of the poster more prominent. Oh, and i've added a pink circle too! What do you think? ^-^
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i like it. Simple and communicative. It gives you a nice feeling.Good job on the vectors
i think it looks really good now :) and it's obvious it's a crate on a parachute and not a balloons basket, haha. the crate looks good and i think the strap line works well and makes it much easier to understand. the only thing i would work on is the greyish outline around all the circles, it's a bit wobbly in places, particularly at the bottom.
I think it looks really good....it makes you look twice and think again.
Thank yoo peeps! :-D
Bowie - this is intertextuality in action!
Good image but amidst the visual texture what do the circles say beyond becoming decoration?
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