Thanks for ur coments I've re-done the last one going over a real car. Im not keen on it right now, but see what you think. thanks for your help with your comments
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it's definitely getting a lot better :) i just think you still need to work on the placement and typeface of the text and the wheel on the car
I agree with Bonnie that you need to improve on the wheel. Try to make it a bit smoother and rounder. Make the text thick and bold and solid. But the shape of the car is fantastic.
I dont know why I said that - this car looks like Peugeot 206! lol
The shape of the car is working much better now! Like bonnie and rajiv said you just need to work on the wheel of it, maybe use the same cans from the outline of the car instead of just one can for the wheel? I don't think you need the recycle text either. Other than that you just need to look at a different typeface and the positioning of the text like bonnie said!
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