Thursday 19 March 2009

one bullet, one life [revised]


done a few changes from what you guys suggested, redrew the bullet hole as i wasnt too keen. Made it small and redid the blood splatter... comments please :)

6 comments:

Matt Hollies said...

like that alot m8, looks so much better already with the same basic idea but just bein tweaked well done

Alex Goodier said...

cheers mate :)

Matt Preston said...

Nice idea Alex. I love it's simplicity.

I'm not too sure about the grammar at the bottom. You're using a semi colon, but I think it would be more appropriate with a normal colon. Ask an English expert. Like Jeff!
one bullet : one life
I think it's almost an = symbol, but more grammatically correct. Hope this helps.

I don't think there's anything you can add. Or even anything you can take away. Good job.

Alex Goodier said...

thanks Matt :) yeah i think you are right about the semi-colon. I'll consult the Jeff about my crap grammer lol

Aneesa said...

looks gr8!! simple yet so powerful n effective!! like the use of asymmetrical thought to the layout! [[[think it needs to be a semi-colon n all!!]]] well dunz!! ;o]

Anonymous said...

yeah I really like this pal.
The simplicity of it and the red against white is certainly striking and you can't beat a bit of lowercase helvetica!

for what you want to put across, this does it just right i think.