i've taken on peoples advice and got rid of the blood splatter and the text that was in the bottom right hand corner and just kept the more subtle "home sweet home" text. i've also tried to make the perspective of the hutch work a bit better, but i'm still not sure if it looks right? is there anything anyone thinks i should add or change? thanks :) ..(also, this is a screenshot so hopefully the colours will look right this time)
Thursday 12 March 2009
updated poster
i've taken on peoples advice and got rid of the blood splatter and the text that was in the bottom right hand corner and just kept the more subtle "home sweet home" text. i've also tried to make the perspective of the hutch work a bit better, but i'm still not sure if it looks right? is there anything anyone thinks i should add or change? thanks :) ..(also, this is a screenshot so hopefully the colours will look right this time)
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I still think it doesn't need any text on there whatsoever! I think it's a matter of taking things away for this poster.
As for the perspective, I literally mean cut the back leg of the hutch, and move it leftwards, past the crack in the patio - then the perspective will look even.
When this is all done, it will be AWESOME!
Hope I've helped!
ahh yes i'll do that, cheers matt :)
This is looking alot better now without the other text. I'm not sure what else you could change on it apart from perhaps the lighting where the rabbits outline is, could you maybe darken it a little? I still think the slogan works well with it but perhaps look at a different typeface for it. Hope this helps! :)
yeah that light spots been annoying me too, i was just too lazy to change it haha. i will do that though, stupid flash >_< cheers :)
From looking at this post for the 1st time, i didnt work out what it was about (but that could be me) so i look bk for ur one before and i think u should put the blood back on, lightly around the rabbit.
yes i think move the hutch like matt said. and maybe have less of the fence shown.
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