I'm trying to get the viewer to report and stop child abuse.A quarter of adults in the UK have worried that a child they know may have be neglected, but over a third did not act on their concerns.
Please give me some feedback. Thank you
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I think this is visually attractive. The dramatic close up of the glass and the child in the broken glass works.
I would just have a re-think on the caption, I personally don't understand why that caption is used with the glass?
With a great font this will look really good well done
Agree with Matt. Strong visual but not too well connected to the concept/message.
I love the bottom one - it looks powerful and effective. Good work!
I also agree with Matt. I think your message is strong and the glass with the child's reflection is visually really strong and eye catching!
I would also re-think the caption I think there may be a better way of linking the image with the message you are trying to portray.
I think these are strong images...powefrull and make you look....maybe again the message needs to be slightly clearer.
I think the one of the child staring into the glass is really good Jamela.
It really does not need the monster, nor do I think that it needs a caption. It's a really powerful image - I think if you changed around with the tonal values ie brought out the contrasts of black and whites a touch more - it will certainly be a lot more eye catching.
I agree with Matt. The first one without the monster would do. I'm not too sure about the caption tho. U should work around with that a bit. As soon as i saw the broken glass i linked it to the child's soul and feelings..
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