Wednesday 4 March 2009

Child abuse


My idea is to enlighten the occurrence of child abuse, and of course help prevent it.

This is some rough sketches of my ideas.
The first one is showing an neglected child, and the second one is about physical abuse.

Please let me know what you think! :)
 


6 comments:

ian said...

Idea 1
good combination of hand drawing and photography but you need to be clear and confident about the message think about situations/environments games that children play and grow the idea out of that

Idea 2
interesting use of visual scale again think specifically about the message what is it that you want to communicate and generate ideas around the anticipation and fear of physical abuse

Anonymous said...

nice hand

cathrine tønnessen said...

i like idea 2, but maybe u should try to make the child look more like a shape in the hand? like he had punched it so many times that it does not fade away ?

Grace Oakley said...

I really like your first visual, I think the combination of hand drawn illustration and photography works really well, however, I don't think the message of 'child abuse' is prominent enough, I think there could be a more focused way of portraying this message. I also like the fact that you are not using typography, I think your poster could be really strong using purely image.

Amy Goodwin said...

I think that your first idea is visually stronger than the second and the imagery works well together, however i think maybe you need a slogan to show the message more clearly to the viewer.

Anonymous said...

the first ones good but lol @ the hand on the second one :|