Monday 2 March 2009

Up-dated Recycling


Up dated better images, and improved work.

Please comment 

6 comments:

Rajiv Chada said...

You need a better quality of the image for the car and you need to show the cans a bit more noticeable.

Daryl Cox said...

Yeah i agree with Rajiv but i feel the image itself does represent your issue quite well, better improvement from the others.

Amy Goodwin said...

This idea works much better than your previous ones. However like Rajiv said you need to use a better quality image. Maybe think about the slogan more too, perhaps it doesn't need as much text. Also maybe try looking at different typefaces that will fit better with the overall design.

Anonymous said...

you need to get rid of the obvious rectangle shapes around the images of the cans and make them all blend together better, also need to do a better job of editing around the wheel. typeface could be nicer too

Anonymous said...

oh and you don't need a question mark at the end of that statement

Jeff said...

Hope the crit was useful yesterday?